Sunday, November 29, 2009

No Bloodied Hands

Let there not be mire
but the taste of fresh air
or that we may fade
in some other place
Let there be fire
in peoples instead
so they may embrace
no nothingness
or else build a fortress
and swathe the night anew
or to awake tomorrow
with no bloodied hands

1 comment:

Unknown said...

Wala akong mahawakan dito, Andrew. Mailap ang mga salita mo.

Maybe what I want to say is to expose more, bank on specific, concrete and tangible details rather than describing a general concept.

Pero naaapreciate ko ang direction ng style mo. Mas simple. :)